Can someone take a look at my Emerson Honors essay?

<p>The deadline is in two days, so anyone that can help me out please PM me as soon as you can. Thanks! I can read people's essays as well.</p>

<p>bumpp! anyone?</p>

<p>i'll look at it..you can look at mines 2</p>

<p>Anyone else? I'm desperate here guys! Deadline is tomorrow!</p>