Can someone tell me if this sentence is grammatically correct or edit it to sound better...?

Applying to College
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<p>It was a positive place for me where I could learn and be
around people who cared for me like a family.</p>

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<p>bump</p>

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<p>You could Break it up into two or more sentences. Or try something like it was a positive place because not only could I learn from the people there, but they cares for me like family. </p>