<p>Hey guys!</p>
<p>I completed my commonapp essay on an encounter of diversity and the importance of diversity in my perspective.</p>
<p>Can well respected (high post count, many essays read etc) members check for the grammar and subject matter of my essay through private message and give me feedback?</p>
<p>I’m sorry for being a bit paranoid and please don’t take offense if I don’t send you my essay!</p>
<p>Thanks!</p>