Can you guys give me a feed back on my reinstatement petition

<p>My name is XXXX [PID], I am currently majoring in a general management course at XXX.
I received an email from the university stating that I have been placed under academic recess for not performing well in previous semester. I am writing this petition letter with the hope that the university will reconsider its decision. When I received the news of my recess, I was deeply saddened, but I understood the reason for this action. I have been a serious student and an avid learner all my life, but when I came to the states, I got to know the system , and it was totally different from the system in India , the education here is much more practical based rather than just theory, which is a good thing , however , this was the first time that I was away from my family, and that to for such a long time.</p>

<p>I am fully aware of what the academic recess means and take responsibility for my actions and their following consequences, however , there were two events that transpired , that were a hindrance in my learning. During the month of February, my granddad was detected with gall bladder cancer, and also, in the following month , my dad met with an accident that required him to undergo a major hip replacement surgery. I am a person who is rooted in tradition and so I am very close to my family. I started to lose focus in my studies and wasn’t dedicated enough.
I managed to score decent marks in my first set of exams, but got off track after February , this had adverse effects on my marks because everything kept pilling up on me , and finally when I did manage to get serious , it was too late. I blame myself for everything because I should have been strong, should have tackled the problem well, shouldn’t have lost focus and should have gone for personal counseling, although I implemented everything that my advisor told me to do, I made a personal calendar that had all the due dates marked on it, I made study groups and even went to the library often.</p>

<p>The subject that I faced challenges in was economics (EC 202). It was a difficult class and I was having problems in studying it. I even went for extra class but even that wasn’t enough, I didn’t know what to do and did not consult my professor, this was my fatal mistake. Also, I took an online class(TC 101) which I though would help me lessen the load, but I was wrong , I wasn’t able to keep a track , and ended up doing poorly.</p>

<p>When the admission society accepted my application, they must have thought that I was competent enough to be studying at such an esteemed university, I can assure you that I can and will perform well if given the chance. Things will be different this time, there will be a monumental difference in my grades this semester.
Now I have decided to step up my preparations and bring my A game forward, I am going to take a number of courses out of which, two will be repeats and two will be new. I am going to use the facilities that the university provides to my advantage. I am going to use the writing center, ill get help from the professors, ill get help from the math learning center, ill be an active participant in class discussions and also I will meet with an academic adviser every two weeks to discuss my position, also I am going to manage my time well, and increase my visits to the library.</p>

<p>Now that I have found my problem and will do everything in my power to rectify it, I think that a recess will be counter-productive. Currently, I am doing a course in math and economics that will help me get through the difficulties of the subjects ahead.</p>

<p>Sounds good if you can provide documentation of the extenuating circumstance you faced with your family health crisis. Also, send documentation from faculty confirming that you did better later in the semester once you buckled down (if that was the case). Add detail and documentation about your current math and econ courses (summer school in India?). </p>