Can you guys go over my resume?

<p>EXPERIENCES
Vice President, Agape Youth Ministry, ****** Church, 06/2008 – Present
:white_small_square: Planned and organized various annual church events with other executive members
:white_small_square: Administered the activities of every youth ministry division such as praise team, production eam, creative arts team, etc.
:white_small_square: Oversaw all the online activities at the ministry’s official website and posted announcements regularly
:white_small_square: Coordinated the 2008 Summer Retreat through program planning, participant allocation, and booklet production
:white_small_square: Directed and produced the youth ministry advertisement video clip
:white_small_square: Researched the religions of Korean-speaking population in Northern Virginia</p>

<p>Vice President, Korean Society Club, ****** High School, 09/2007 – 09/2008
:white_small_square: Terminated the club policy which allows only Koreans to join and introduced Korean culture to non-Korean members
:white_small_square: Directed and participated in Korean traditional and modern dance performances for annual cultural festivals</p>

<p>Treasurer, Agape Youth Ministry, ****** Church, 06/2007 – 08/2008
:white_small_square: Digitalized the account book and all the supplementary financial documents
:white_small_square: Recorded the amount of weekly collection and adjusted the budget account.
:white_small_square: Created a digital version of yearbook and distributed to graduating seniors</p>

<p>Intern, The Embassy Consular Office, Washington, DC 01/2006 – 06/2007
:white_small_square: Computerized passport and visa applications and operated the passport renewing process
:white_small_square: Adjusted the archives and collected the newspaper articles concerning U.S.-Korea diplomatic relations
:white_small_square: Communicated with Korean American organizations via fax and mail</p>

<p>Writer, Photographer, Monthly Magazine Friends, ****** Church, 09/2005 – 09/2007
:white_small_square: Composed many articles about monthly events at Agape Youth Ministry with many pictures
:white_small_square: Distributed the magazines to Korean teenagers in the neighboring community
:white_small_square: Generated a digital version of the magazine using Adobe Flash </p>

<p>Short Term Missionary, Youth Work, Montana 06/2005 -06/2007
:white_small_square: Repaired the old houses and repainted community buildings in the Native American reservation
:white_small_square: Opened Vacational Bible School for a week for the pre-school children whose both parents need to go to work
:white_small_square: Taught pre-school Native American children Bible stories and led various arts and craft activities</p>

<p>Electric Guitarist, Praise Team, ****** Church, 06/2004 – 02/2008
:white_small_square: Played an electric guitar at every Sunday service and Friday informal service
:white_small_square: Led the praise team several times.
:white_small_square: Practiced approximately 4 hours a week</p>

<p>Student Tutor, Advisor Assistant, ******** Community Education, 03/2004 - 08/2006
:white_small_square: Tutored low-income children in math and English
:white_small_square: Mailed students progress reports to their parents</p>

<p>PERSONAL PROJECTS</p>

<p>Church Management Software
:white_small_square: Allowed easier treasury management
:white_small_square: Simplified the process of recording attendance
:white_small_square: Kept track of the items in a storeroom</p>

<p>Learning Vocabulary Software
:white_small_square: Aided foreign language memorization process
:white_small_square: Asked for meanings of the words in the list the user provided</p>

<p>Computer Hardware Assemblage
:white_small_square: Researched and purchased the computer parts
:white_small_square: Assembled the parts </p>

<p>ACTIVITIES
Senior Math Team (2005 ~ Present)
Korean Society Club (2005 ~ Present)
Science Olympiad (2005 ~ 2008)
Math Honor Society (2005 ~ 2007)
Key Club (2005~ 2007)
Robotics (2005~2006)</p>

<p>CERTIFICATIONS
Craftsman Information Processing Certification Human Resources Development Service of Korea
Word Processor Professional Certification The Korea Chamber of Commerce and Industry
Internet and Computing Core Certification Certiport</p>

<p>SKILLS
Software: Proficient in Microsoft Office, Adobe Photoshop, Adobe Illustrator, Adobe Flash
Programming Language: Proficient with Java Standard Edition, Microsoft Visual Basic, Familiar with Java Mobile Edition
Language: Fluent in English and Korean, Familiar with Spanish and Chinese
Instruments: Acoustic Guitar, Electric Guitar, Piano</p>

<p>Well I erased some of the things(my name and address and stuffs and city and state)
for privacy.</p>

<p>do you think the resume looks good for computer engineering major?</p>

<p>Just out of idle curiosity, where in Montana were you? Are your dates right for that- you were there for two years?</p>

<p>One thing I heard from my counselor while showing him my resume and it applies a lot with yours is that the adcoms get a lot of resumes, and when there’s so much on it, it makes it hard for them to actually read it all without just putting it in the stack. So I’d advise taking out some of these things. Remember–most colleges aren’t going to accept you based on your major. It’s good to have the plan and let them now about it, but these details are lengthy and I think some of them could be taken out.</p>

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<p>Change ‘Vacational’ to Vacation.</p>

<p>Change ‘Assemblage’ to Assembly</p>

<p>For the 2 week mission trips, say: </p>

<p>Short Term Youth Mission Trip - Montana (2 weeks each year 6/05, 6/06, 6/07)</p>

<p>Missionary sounds like you are preaching religion</p>

<p>For the Embassy internship, state how many hours/month you worked.</p>

<p>okok thx Madison85</p>

<p>anything else to change guys?</p>