<p>I have completed over 150 volunteer hours at {name} Hospital. Delivering and filing medical transcriptions is one of my favorite jobs. Through this work, I was able to explore every part of the hospital while having the responsibility of carefully delivering important information. As I reflect on this, I notice that a lot of people benefit from my service - the patients, the hospital administration, nurses, doctors, visitors, and the list could go on. Essentially, the people I help directly end up helping other people.</p>
<p>I need help rephrasing this, especially the last 2 sentences. It seems a little choppy to me.</p>
<p>Thank you.</p>