Can you help me shorten my paper?

Hi, I need helping shortening my paper and still make it a strong, coherent essay. It is 635 words and I have to make it between 300-400 words. If you guys can just read and shorten it, tell me and I will PM. BTW, it is the UIC paper

No one should edit your essays. People advising you can make suggestions thematically and suggest you to focus on grammatical issues.