Can you rate my essay: Should people accept unfairness and find ways to make the best of it?

<p>HI! I’d love if you could rate my essay on a scale from 2 to 12! THANKS A LOT!!
it is almost two pages long in my handwriting.</p>

<p>While ostensibly people believe that sometimes unfairness should be accepted, in reality unfairness should never be considered as acceptable. in fact if every single person accepted disparities and injustice, segregation laws in the US would have never been abolished, we would have never tried to eliminate Mafia and corruption in Southern Italy and probably we would have never gained a democratic constitution.</p>

<p>Without Rosa Parks strong action against the unfair segregation laws, probably also today colored people would still be considered unequally in USA.
In 1955 Mrs Parks refused to give up her seat to a white man on a bus, and was arrested for this reason. Thanks to this powerful gesture many others Afroamericans in Montgomery gained the courage to create a new organization (MIA), which had the aim to abolish the segregation of colored people.
If the black community had accepted the unfairness done to Rosa Parks and kept on living their lives as usual, probably nowadays segregation would still persist.</p>

<p>Another great example of the importance of refusing unfairness is Paolo Borsellino, an italian anti-mafia magistrate. Borsellino, together with other magistrates such as Giovanni Falcone, created a fundamental organization, the Antimafia Pool. This men worked closely together and did several investigations that lead to a Maxi trial against the Mafiain which several mafiosi were indicted for many crimes and condemned. It was the first time that Mafia was officially recognized in Italy.
What would have happened if Borsellino simply tried to make the best out of this unfair situation instead of fighting it to create a more equal nation? Probably there would still be people that deny the existence of Cosa Nostra or their power and their cruelty.</p>

<p>Last but not least, if everyone had accepted unfairness, there would have been not a single democratic constitution in our world. it is always important to remember the significance of the French Revolution: many people succeeded in gaining more freedom and equality through a democratic constitution, because they were brave enough to refuse an unfair regime.</p>

<p>There is not a single good reason that can make us accept unfairness. As Gandhi said: “Be the change you want to see in the world”. If every single individual accepted unfairness then we would all live in a worse world where democracy and equality are two unknown words: It is fundamental that each one of us stops accepting unfairness as a possible solution to a problem</p>