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Prompt: Should we complain to get what we want ?

   We should not complain to get what we want. complaint means showing our desires and needs unfavorably without even aiming at getting them by ourselves. one should struggle to acquire his needs without moaning to other people; complaint often do not guarantees one's needs to come true. Although many people believe that one could approach what he want by complaint, I believe that one could approach what he want without complaint. 
    In literature, many writers have tackled the theme of complain. In New Direction, by Maya Angelo,  Ms. Annie Johnson figured out a way for her welfare without complain. she cook for the two factories' workers, moving miles between the two factories. Despite her lack of culinary skills, she managed to make a living by "mixing ingredients". she struggled to get what she want without complaining to other people.
    Furthermore, other writers have depicted the theme of complaint in their works. For example, In the Old And The Sea , the old man risked his life through the sea to prove that he is not misfortunate without showing his misery but with resolute and determination. He in his own took his boat and fought with the sharks to defend his statue to his people. if he did not work for himself and complained about his miser, he might not attain what he want.
   In addition, history is filled with heroes and groups of people who acquire their needs by themselves only. Gandhi guided the Indians to fight their colonizers without revolution or any form of violence protest . The Indians drove the British out of their lands through boycott and other peaceful  activities; They did not fought them off by showing their wishes and desires but by boycott. 
     In conclusion, people could attain their wishes and needs by getting their desires themselves not by showing them to other people for assistance.