Decision: Accepted
Applied to which school/college: MCS and DC (Science and Humanities Scholars Program)
Objective:
SAT I (breakdown): 670 CR 720 M 700 W (2090)
ACT: 29 (did not send)
SAT II: 750 Biology 680 Math I
Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): 3.96
Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): 5/128
AP (place score in parenthesis): AP Biology, AP US History, AP Physics, AP Chemistry, AP Calculus
IB (place score in parenthesis): not offered at my school
Senior Year Course Load: Medical Law and Ethics, Anatomy and Physiology, AP Chemistry, AP Calculus, Government, Economics, Spanish 5, English, Chorus, Gym, and Health Careers Exploration, Senior Success Seminar
Major Awards (USAMO, Intel etc.): AP Scholar
Subjective:
Extracurriculars (place leadership in parenthesis): NHS (President), Science Olympiad (President), Drama Club (Director), Key Club, Origami Club (Vice President), Green Team, Varsity Tennis, Varsity Swim, FBLA, Peer Mentoring
Job/Work Experience: Tutoring Algebra and Geometry, Babysitting
Volunteer/Community service: Mission Trips to Nicaragua, Mission Trip to D.C., Volunteer at Assisted Living Facility, Hospital Volunteer
Summer Activities: Assisted Living Facility, Hospital Volunteer, Language Immersion Program in Spain, Physics Researcher at State University
Essays (rating 1-10, details): 9 It was well written and the topic was very personal. Definitely a unique story that expressed my maturity. My supplement wasn’t the greatest, but hey it got me in!
Recommendations (rating 1-10, details): 10 They were all amazing.
Teacher Rec #1: Incredible. He was my Science Olympiad coach for four years and taught AP Physics.
Teacher Rec #2: Teacher of the medical program I am in at the hospital.
Counselor Rec: Good.
Additional Rec: Amazing. Drama Club Advisor and has been working with my since freshman year. She appointed me to Lead Director as a Junior.
Interview: It could not have gone any better. We clicked instantly. She commended my articulation and poise. I even played with her cats.
Other
State: New York
School Type: Rural Public
Ethnicity: Indian
Gender: Female
Income Bracket: >100,000
Hooks: First Generation College
Reflection
Strengths: Extracurriculars, Recommendations, Essays
Weaknesses: Test Scores, Lack of APs
Why you think you were accepted/deferred/rejected: Essays and Extracurriculars
Where else were you accepted/deferred/rejected:
Accepted to Emory, RPI, Geneseo, McGill, Alabama, Boston College, and Union College
Rejected at Georgetown, Duke, and Vanderbilt.
General Comments: I am really really happy about my acceptance. CMU seems like a great school and I look forward to visiting in about two weeks. Good luck to everyone!