this is my first post on cc, please let me know if there’s anything else I should add?? thank you in advance for any feedback… I’d really appreciate if you could recommend me some schools that would fit me well/chance me for the schools I’m applying to.!!
Demographics
- female, domestic student, Florida resident
- public suburban HS, class size of around 570
- Other special factors: none I can think of?
few cost constraints? for UF I plan on getting the Bright Futures scholarship
Intended Major: I plan to double major in entomology/biochem ideally; I’m also okay with a biochem (or similar) major and entomology minor, I know entomology is a pretty “niche” major all things considered??
GPA, Rank, and Test Scores
- Unweighted HS GPA: 3.45 ; may change by 0.1 or more in like. a few days because I have a grade-recovery credit that’s about to go through lol. for now just go with that number
- Weighted HS GPA: 4.1 (5.0 scale) ; see above
- Class Rank: 140-ish out of 570-ish
- ACT/SAT Scores: 1460 best score (780 EBRW, 680 math) , 1470 superscore (780 EBRW, 690 math)
List your HS coursework
(Indicate advanced level, such as AP, IB, AICE, A-level, or college, courses as well as specifics in each subject)
- English: english honors 1/2, DE english composition (ENC1101/02), DE world literature (LIT2110/20)
- Math: honors algebra 2, AP precalculus, AP calc ab, AP statistics
- Science: honors chemistry, AP chemistry, AP physics 1, AP physics 2, AP bio, AP environmental science
- History and social studies: AP world, honors US history, DE comp. government, AP macro
- Language other than English: spanish 1, DE spanish 1 (SPN1121/22)
- Visual or performing arts: 2D art, speech
- Other academic courses: AP capstone courses
Awards (no clue how impressive these are? nat merit is pretty good probably)
- [region] SciOly Gold Medalist (Entomology)
- AP Capstone Award
- National Merit Semifinalist
- AP Scholar w/Distinction
- National Hispanic Recognition Program
Extracurriculars
the info sections are copied from common app (personal info removed)
science olympiad
- Competed at regional, invitational, and state levels. Collaborated with teammates and other students. Helped organize study sessions and meetups.
UF SSTP
- Conducted biochemistry research under Dr. [prof name]. Collected and analyzed data, collaborated with other researchers, and presented results at program showcase.
[piano studio name] performer/tutor
- Performed a vast repertoire of classical piano pieces. Guided younger students. Helped organize a free holiday concert at a local nursing home.
[magazine name] contributing artist
- Contributed original illustrations to an online magazine. Met deadlines, communicated with organizers, and offered feedback to other contributors.
[county] regional science fair judge
- Evaluated 70+ students competing in regional science fair. Discussed rankings with other judges, helped foster love for science in participants.
[school name] gaming club organizer
- Organized gaming interest club. Relayed announcements, corresponded with sponsors, and promoted at school fair. Grew membership by 50+ students.
[studio name] concept artist
- Designed characters and monsters for an indie game studio. Collaborated with other artists to create cohesive visuals for an upcoming game.
JHU CTY
- Completed college coursework on zoology and microbiology at a selective summer program. Ran experiments and presented in a conference-style format.
random club
- this one isn’t that important ngl I just needed 10 activities…
family responsibility (unpaid work)
- Unpaid work for family business. Drafted emails, recorded meetings, oversaw bookkeeping, and corresponded with other employees.
Essays/LORs/Other
- essays are pretty good, I think? I spent a lot of time on them and I think they show a lot of my personality (I do wish I had talked more about my passion for my major in them especially because of how uncommon it is, but other than that they’re unique and very representative of me as a person) I will probably also post them into the essay review board at some point soon-ish but. not right now
- teacher LOR from AP physics teacher/scioly coach ; I didn’t read it, but I consider his LORs very strong as they got me into a selective internship program
and he knows me very well because of scioly so. - add’l LOR/second teacher rec? from UF professor I interned under that I hope is strong? lol. he thought pretty highly of me and I did some pretty good work under him so I’m hoping for the best here.
Schools
- Extremely Likely: SUNY ESF, Michigan SU
- Likely:
- Toss-up: UF (would be lower, but apparently SSTP is kind of a feeder program for UF and I’ve heard a lot of people who complete it get in? I’m not banking on it though)
- Lower Probability: UGA, NCSU
- Low Probability: Cornell (respectfully there ain’t no way. still trying though.!!!)
these are just estimates but. I don’t know. everyone else I talk to in my school has way better stats than me and they’re doubting themselves so much more than I am so it’s making me kinda scared to say the least. also let me know if there are other colleges I should consider applying to? I was considering UW and Purdue but I just feel like with my low GPA they’re so out of reach.
I have extra info in my extenuating circumstances section about my low GPA; I had a really bad drop in my sophomore year because of a chronic illness I was diagnosed with but I got almost all As in my junior year so hopefully they take it into account?? I was also not really able to participate in a lot of activities freshman/sophomore year for the aforementioned reasons so. yeah.