Hi guys! I just joined this platform to get an idea of my chances for the schools I am applying to. I am currently in 8th grade attending a foreign mainly English speaking school, and applying for 9th grade. I have decided to apply to 8 schools: Berkshire School, Kent School, Northfield Mount Hermon, Blair Academy, Loomis Chaffee School, Milton School, Concord Academy, and Lawrenceville School.
Fyi, I haven’t submitted or completed my application yet, so please feel free to give me feedback on what I should change.
About me:
I am an only child of upper-class living in Busan, South Korea. I was born and raised in Los Angeles, California, where I lived for 9 years. In terms of citizenship, I have a US passport and a Korean passport, but I have most recently been living in Korea for the past 5 years. Nationality: Korean, Gender: Male
For all of my schools I will be applying as a boarding student w/o financial aid.
I’m really worried about my profile as I feel like I don’t have enough volume (if that makes sense) for it.
SSAT: 90th percentile (1st try, don’t have time for another)
Grades: Straight A+ in all my classes of middle school
Awards/Honors/Positions
- STEM Fair Regional 1st place 2023
- STEM Fair Regional 2nd place 2024
- National Honor Band - 1st Clarinet in Advanced Section 2024
- National Honor Band - 1st Clarinet in Novice Section 2023
- K-Art Competition (most prestigious youth Korean Art contest) - Special Selection (I submitted a painting)
- School T-Shirt Design Contest Winner (represents our school on events such as Founders Day, Spirit Week, etc.)
Extracurriculars (my biggest worry)
- Clarinet - 4 years. In my school’s advanced band this year, but was intermediate band the year before. My honors are listed above in the awards section for clarinet.
- Student Government - 3 years. I guess this kinda counts as volunteering as well as we hosted many fundraisers and donations for charity. I was class rep in 6th grade before moving on to be elected executive secretary for both last year and this year in 8th grade. I was one of most crucial parts of organizing basically all school events. Ex: Founders Day, Spirit Week, Community Culture Day, all of the Middle School excursions (amusement parks, field trips, yk), and etc.
- Soccer - 3 years at school team’s varsity as CDM
- Basketball - 4 years at school team’s varsity as SF
- Volleyball (not popular for boys in US) - 3 years at school team’s varsity as setter
- Painting/Visual art - 7 years. I just really loved art from a young age and won a title as mentioned above which was cool.
- Robotics/Sciences - participated in multiple STEM Fairs with different topics ranging from psychology to chemistry. In robotics I have made several projects with arduinos, raspberry pi, and etc. Also did a lot of coding in school but didn’t put it on my application.
Essays/Rec Letters/Interviews
Regarding my interviews (all online), I have not done them for a lot of my schools. However, for Lawrenceville and Concord I’m required to use Vericant as I am an international student, but I’m not worrying too much about that as I’m a native speaker and I’ve never attended a school that doesn’t use English. For Milton, they put me on a waitlist for the interview as I’m applying SUPER SUPER late for all of my schools (sad). Berkshire wavered the requirement as they simply didn’t have space for another online interview. As for the school I did do an interview with, Kent, interviewer was super nice and I think I did pretty well. Please give me any tips for my future interviews as I have my NMH interview today, and Blair, Loomis in the future (won’t mind tips for my Vericant in a few days as well).
For my essays, I think I did okay on them, but I haven’t submitted them yet. Haven’t had the chance to get anyone to look at them besides my dad, so please (you don’t have to) DM or comment if you are able to read them and provide so feedback. I’m also using common portal SAO which just makes life a lot easier for me.
My recommendation letters are kind of mixed. So far, only my any teacher letter (writing) has submitted his recommendation, and I know it’s really strong from him as we’re close and he even mentioned in his reply how he gave me full marks on all departments. As for the administrator, it was either my principal (kind of cold) or the admissions director who is nice but I don’t know well. He responded saying that he would be willing to write me one, but wanted me to stay (?) as I am one of the best students at BFS. English teacher has not yet responded, but my relationship with her is okay as she is also the STUCO advisor. Math teacher is really young, so I’m not sure if he’ll be able to write a good rec, but he was my soccer coach and we are pretty chill and close.
Thanks for reading all of this, and I hope to get at least a few replies. Bye!