<p>Hey,</p>
<p>I’m from Israel, almost 21 and applying to these schools:
- Bates
- Bucknell University
- Claremont McKenna
- Colby
- Colgate University
- Davidson College
- Depauw
- Kenyon College
- Lafayette College
- Middlebury College
- Sewanee
- Trinity College
- Union College
- Hamilton
- Dickinson</p>
<p>unfortunately, I am demonstrating a significant amount of financial need (full cost minus around 10000K). all schools above meet/almost meet a 100% of an international student’s financial need, and that’s the main reason for choosing these schools.
About myself - I graduated high school in 2008. My overall unweighted high school GPA is 3.7, however I took the most advanced science courses and received A’s and A+'s on them. I put a lot of effort into my studies my last two years in high school and have very high grades in those years. I took two BA level courses at a university here when I was 17 and received 89 and 90 (out of a 100). Served in the army here in Israel in an elite unit and lead a project that received the Israel Defense Prize. I have a lot of leadership experience, within and without the army.
My SAT score is 1440/2180 (one sitting: M:780, CR:660, W:740). I’m taking SAT II in January in math 2 and chemistry. My TOEFL is 112 (30 on the reading there).
Work Experience:
Software developer from the age of 16 to 18. Lead a year-long high grossing project when I was 17.
During and alongside the army, worked as a head of technology for a start up in the mobile phones field.
Currently a senior software developer at a hitech company.
Currently working as freelance security expert (malware research, reverse engineering and so forth)
EC’s
Spent 4 months in the states after high school and obtained a private pilots license
Volunteered at Pilots for Charity to fly children with long term diseases
Volunteered at El-Al Israel Airlines and helped them built their pilots training program
Been playing guitar for 5 years, school performances and so forth
Tennis played for 5 years and coached kids.
Volunteered at the Israeli civil guard and as an anti drugs spokesperson
Traveled extensively around the world, for business and for pleasure.</p>
<p>We dont have honors / AP here in Israel, however I received a 787 out of 800 (99th percentile) on the Israeli SAT equivalent.</p>
<p>My writing is good and I think I have a lot to say about myself I am a high achiever and I have a lot of interests, an interesting perspective and can offer a great deal of diversity. I get along with everybody, am very sociable, and have very good recommendations (from teachers, army, and employers). I also think that not a lot of Israelis (or Middle Easterns in general) apply to american colleges so hopefully that will up my chances.</p>
<p>is there anything I can do to make myself more appealing?
please let me know your thoughts - i will chance back with pleasure!</p>