I’d love any feedback regarding the strengths and weaknesses of my application, and what I should work on to improve my chances at these reach schools. Thanks!
Gender: Male
Race: White
Location: Nevada, USA
Graduation Date: June 2017
Unweighted GPA: 3.97
Weighted GPA: 4.34
Class Rank: 8/418
ACT:
First Time: Science 36; Math 32; English 27; Reading 35; Composite 33
Second Time: Science 31; Math 32; English 33; Reading 34; Composite 33
Highest: Science 36; Math 32; English 33; Reading 35; Superscore 34
New SAT:
Reading/Language 740; Math 790; Composite 1530; Essay 20
SAT Subject Tests:
Math II 720; U.S. History 740; Chemistry 770
AP Courses and Exam Scores:
Completed - Language and Composition-5; U.S. History-4; Chemistry-4; Environmental Science-4; Psychology-4; (Didn’t take the classes for Environmental and Psych, just studied on my own and took the exams. I’m interested in how that might illustrate a deeper commitment to independent learning)
Currently Enrolled In - Calculus BC; Statistics; Physics 1; Literature; U.S. Government
Clubs and Organizations:
Block-D Lettermen’s Community Service Club (Jr. - Sr.) (Vice President: Sr.):
Block-D encourages student athletes to give back to the school and community that supports them.
As Vice President I lead a group of 10 students (about 80 total in the club split with different group leaders) on community service projects and fundraising activities including: Setting up day camps for special needs students, reading to elementary kids, Raising over $5000 each Thanksgiving for the food closet through partnerships with local businesses, running food drives to support the families of students in need, setting up school events and fundraising for campus/community improvements, etc. Also, as VP I work to encourage integrity among all student athletes, and really bring the student body together by supporting underappreciated sports and activities (tennis, speech and debate, etc.)
Concert Band: (Fr. - Soph.) (Section Leader: Fr. - Soph.)
Low winds section leader and two time section leader in Northern Nevada Honor Band. Didn’t participate after Sophomore year due to a new and utterly incompetent teacher and some scheduling issues, but I did continue with music independently.
Academic Team (Jr. - Sr.):
Pretty self-explanatory, we travel to various schools competing in academic trivia competitions. I was recently selected from a very competitive field to compete in the Nevada State Science Bowl this February.
Speech and Debate (Sr.):
Despite only recently joining the speech and debate team, it’s had a huge impact on me. I know that clubs joined in Senior year don’t count for much, but in the two tournaments I’ve competed in thus far I’ve placed first and third in Lincoln-Douglas Debate in a field of 46. I’ve also assumed an unofficial leadership position seeing as the team is largely composed of newbies (despite being a rookie myself)
Chemistry Club (Jr. - Sr.) (Treasurer: Jr.)
Mostly composed of past and current AP chem students; we meet at lunch on occasion to do cool labs and catch up on things going on in the scientific community. My job as treasurer is to collect money for lab supplies and decide what to buy.
I know that some of these don’t hold a ton of weight at face value, but I’m wondering what might be worth expanding on in essays/interviews.
Athletics:
Cross Country (Fr. - Sr.)
1x varsity letter. Most Supportive Teammate Award (Soph.). No official captain titles were given to anyone.
Ski Team (Fr. - Jr.)
3x varsity letter. Competed in state championships Freshman and Sophomore year.
Track & Field (Fr. - Sr.)
Switched from distance running to pole vault my junior season due to a knee injury. I realize that overcoming an injury essays are really played out but thought it might be worth mentioning.
Honors and Awards:
- AP Scholar With Distinction Award
- 2x NZMEA Honor Band qualifier and section leader
- 4x Varsity Letterman
- 4x Academic All State Award Recipient
- National Speech and Debate Association Degrees of Merit, Honor, and Excellence
- Nevada State Science Bowl qualifier
- National Academy of Future Physicians and Medical Scientists Award of Excellence
- Most Supportive Teammate Award (Cross Country)
Proposed Major: Biochemistry/Neuroscience