Check my UC essay?

<p>Hello! I'm new and I was wondering if you can read my personal statement for the UC app and tell me if there is anything you liked, disliked, agree with, disagree with... anything wrong... etc. Please help me proofread and make my statement the best possible!</p>

<p>This is just a draft. There may be a lot of errors. Sorry. </p>

<p>Pm me or post hereee and i will pm you :) ! Again, thanks in advance!</p>

<p>I can readd yourss too :)</p>

<p>I can read :]</p>

<p>Send it over!</p>

<p>send it to me!</p>