<p>I’d love to congratulate Schofield on his amazing acceptance to Trinity college!!! Although I’m not from Nepal, I’ve been reading posts on this thread for a long time. Post # 2557 by Schofield on this thread was pretty encouraging. And there is another great thing - We both are heading towards the same state :p</p>
<p>@donod
i have got it. I will explain the whole thing. Just give me few more days so that i can ask the officer in detail about my packet. I need to pay 1300+books+insurance i guess…not sure though. I will bargain with Trinity anyhow if my packet makes me to pay more than 2.1k :p</p>
<p>@omega
thanks. And same to you for making it to ConnColl…</p>
<p>ok…i just got the chance to use the net from the computer…here it goes…
And, @all who read this essay…please dont make the use of it in any negative way…i will be needing this essay for myself in the future…please dont plagarize it…PLEASE</p>
<pre><code> Ghoul of the ‘General Paper’
</code></pre>
<p>My heart was filled with an ineffable satisfaction when my efforts finally paid off; I was
accepted to Budhanilkantha School, which had been my dream school since middle school. I
still vividly remember that exact moment when I stepped inside the compound of my new
school. I was full of all kinds of emotions; excited to be a part of the national school as well as
a little frightened of the challenges that lay in front of me. I was living my dream till I was
dejectedly woken up after ‘General Paper’ entered my life.
It was like any other normal days, uneventful, but what happened later that day left me with a
permanent imprint. My first semester results were out. As my eyes were on the grade in the
subject ‘General Paper’, I was shocked to see a ‘d’, the unknown letter to my academic
transcripts. Never before had I found my mind in that chaotic state. I was forced to question my
commitment and my capabilities.
The then newly explored letter started to become a regular part of my academic progress report.
Fruitless result followed each tireless attempt. Still after the “Trial A-Level Finals”, the same
structure was lingering under “GP” on my transcript. I was doubtful about having the same
grade each time. So, I copied an essay that belonged to my friend from another set for which he
was awarded with an ‘a+’ by his teacher. Then I printed my name on the top of the page. After
two hours I gave my teacher that essay for grading, I was perplexed to see a ‘c-’ followed by the
remark ‘Satisfactory Improvement’.
The confession followed an eerie silence. The red tinge on his face shook my inner core and I
started to feel the gravity of the situation. Moment of adrenaline rush and a deep desire to know
the truth urged me to carry out that “stunt”. It was never the part of the script to make him
embarrassed but was to find the truth from a healthy debate.
I might not had written so well in the starting days of my A-Level when I was almost blank
about the repercussions of varied compositional structure of the essay. But, it didn’t mean that I
should be judged by one’s preconceived notion. I inferred that I was not a ‘d’ candidate, rather a
‘b’ one, as I would have got ‘c-’ for an essay eligible to get ‘a+’. Finally, the CIE marked me with
‘b’ in the final. After all, even if one has got blemishes in the history but has become better now,
he should rather be congratulated for his present days than be penalized for his past.</p>
<p>I would NEVER have recommended sending this essay bro…it sounds extremely risky…you are one of the bravest folk in here…i admire your guts…
Congrats again… :D</p>
if my packet makes me to pay more than 2.1k 