<p>so I just edited, for the first time ever, someone else’s essay.
now who wants to help me
I’m pretty much at peace with the topic/main idea of my own essay, but I’d really really appreciate some help from a stronger writer on the body paragraphs(are they confusing?)
takers?
and as always, thanks!</p>
<p>I will read you essay and make comments. Feel free to pm it to me. I am a parent, btw.</p>
<p>Ill read it!</p>