<p>I’d appreciate it if someone could take a look at it, give help, suggestions, edits, w.e thanks</p>
<p>I joined recently, however if you trust me I would critique it. Feel free to PM me.</p>
<p>ok sent it, id appreciate it if anyone else will take a look</p>
<p>Wanna trade essays for proofread? I recently wrote my Bucknell essay.</p>
<p>Happy to look at it, I’m a good editor…</p>
<p>thanks, does anyone has further suggestions helpin me improve my writing style?</p>