<p>Hey Guys. I’m applying for Oxford University ( Philosophy, Politics & Economics ) this October.The deadline is 4 days from now and I just finished the Personal Statement (Admission Essay), I blame I don’t have mistakes in structure & grammar. If you could please check my PP, and tell me about any error need to be edited.
I’m sure it would take a 5 min from your day but I will be very thankful btw! </p>
<p>Nine miles away from the Land of Peace, there is where I have been living since my childhood, but unfortunately, with no peace around. And as a result, I firmly believe that my passion of being a prolific politician hasn’t evolved by the humanitarian instinct, but my residence in one of the world’s most political crisis regions has been an overwhelmingly strong factor to grab my attention to the field of Politics all these years. And today, my interest in the world of politics has grown wider after reading books, following up news as well as involving in community and youth workshops, which all led me to the belief that politics is a process which has a close logical relationship with other terms, the philosophy and economy, and all form the power of authority that relies on concepts and theories, and make claims upon leverage, and never assume ‘the end justify the means’. Therefore, I believe that the PPE degree has an extraordinary ability to create an integrate politician, to supply him with a sufficient amount of knowledge to perfectly handle our global issues; to be what our world needs.</p>
<p>I originally became very interested in studying PPE after participating in an internship at the Academic University of Non-violence and Human Rights in Lebanon. The internship developed my understanding in terms of the present global issues, particularly the unprecedented Arab’s revolutions. I’ve spent approximately 50 hours working with many international peacemakers over discussing what constitutes a risk to the peace process in Palestine, and organizing youth movements to raise the political awareness in the secondary schools in Palestine. In addition, I have gained a sound knowledge about the situations at a global level, especially the demonstrably fail in the economic rule of some political ideologies. In light of this, I felt I was being preparing for my intended course and developing my interest further with people illustrated the PPE-graduate in their own characters, and through my undergraduate studies I wish to learn more about the philosophical theories toward social policy. </p>
<p>Because I consider my higher education is a responsibility I owe to myself, I assume that the compatibility between my academic abilities and the top-level education offered in the UK prompted me to look beyond seas looking for erudition in learning, and to chose the right education In the right university where I’ll be able to contribute in establishing the world’s unity and peace that last for centuries. Thus, studying in your university will be a marvelous goal precedes the approach that I am attempting to obtain after and during my studies, which I’m determined to study as high level as possible to develop my interest further, and to be a valuable asset to the my country in every way that I can.</p>
<p>I look forward being a valuable part of your diverse international community, as I feel I am fully prepared for this academic step and charged with the required field-experience that makes me a suitable candidate to achieve the desire of studying PPE in Oxford, and I am confident on the way you will judge my application.</p>
<p>Thanks in advance</p>