<p>I’m thinking about a topic sentence for my college essay… I want it to be an attention grabber like " My life changed when I went to jail…" or something like that, that will get them hooked…Any ideas??? Thanks!!!</p>
<p>… how bout telling us the topic first? is it really on jail?</p>
<p>Yeah, you need a topic first LOL. It took me a few weeks to craft my first sentence, but eventually you’ll get it.</p>
<p>I don’t know if you really went to jail, but it’s best to describe by showing, not telling. It would be cool to start with a description of the cell and then later explain how your life changed. I dunno…</p>