College Essay Help!!

Hi, have a question. Does this sentence make sense?

I realized that <horse’s name=""> and I are not a dichotomy of human and horse; we are a team. </horse’s>

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Can someone please help? I need to submit.

are you trying to say that even though two of you are separate creatures, you guys are still a team. if so, then yes that sentence makes sense. hopefully you can help me read my college essay, i can pm it to you if you are wiling.