<p>Would anyone like to read my essay, the topic is about becoming a cyborg (sounds weird I know, but it’ll make sense when you read it)</p>
<p>would love people’s suggestions and grammatical edits etc…</p>
<p>thanks, and if you can do it asap thats great</p>
<p>because its kinda due tonight haha lol…</p>
<p>I just recently joined, but I’d be happy to help if you trust me enough. Feel free to PM me.</p>
<p>thanks pmed</p>
<p>would love more critques as well</p>
<p>ill read too</p>
<p>Thanks everyone! would still love more though, every critique helps me learn something new</p>
<p>would really like more, almost desperate lol</p>
<p>I’d be happy to look at it and send comments…</p>
<p>Okay, I’ll bite.</p>
<p>bumping it up</p>
<p>the more the better</p>
<p>I’ll read tonight…
I will warn you though, I am quite harsh.</p>