college essay need reading over

College Essays
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<p>Hey guys I finnished one of my essays. please help me read it over and comment on it. Thanks alot guys. BTW I need to email it to you guys because it is pretty long (but exciting though)</p>

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<p>Sure. Email it to me. <a href="mailto:jacquelele@yahoo.com">jacquelele@yahoo.com</a></p>

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<p>I’ll give it a read. <a href="mailto:JadeFire19@gmail.com">JadeFire19@gmail.com</a></p>

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