<p>I’m sure that you’re all trying desperately to enjoy the tail end of summer right now, but if you have time to read/edit my essay and give me your feedback, that’s great! If not, no worries.
I’m pretty sure that all the technical stuff is cleaned up (i.e. grammar, spelling) but what I really need some help with has to do with the flow of the essay. However, any other input is absolutely welcome.
Please, be as honest as you can be. </p>
<p>Let me know, and I’ll send it to you in a private message!</p>
<p>I’m only a junior in high school, but I’m willing to read it. :)</p>
<p>I’ll give it a go.</p>
<p>Pm it to me and i’ll read it over</p>
<p>I’ll check it out. PM me.</p>
<p>What did you write about? Send it over. I can give it a read.</p>
<p>I wouldn’t mind taking a look at it</p>
<p>Hey everyone! I guess I should kind of give some background info in conjunction to the essay. </p>
<p>4.0 GPA
1840 SAT I (And will hopefully pull that up, with some effort.)
Top 10% in class ranking
7 AP classes throughout high school career.
EXTREMELY active member of my school’s competitive speech and debate team. (Nationally ranked speaker, numerous awards, served as President, Vice President, and President of Platform Speaking.)
Taking classes at Villanova while in high school.
Interning with an organization called TechGirlz in Philadelphia.
Working a ton, crafting a ton. </p>
<p>I’m sending my essay off now, just making a few quick changes. Thank you all!</p>
<p>I want to read it.</p>
<p>It sounds interesting.please pm me</p>
<p>Sent from my HTC Glacier using CC App</p>
<p>I would like to give it a view, if you don’t mind.</p>
<p>@LesleyCordero and @Senior0991 - thanks for your input! I’ve been making some changes.</p>
<p>@jungian and @RedSn0w: I was about ready to find a new topic and write a new essay until I received your comments. Sometimes it’s nice to have a fresh set of eyes to look it over, because I was just getting tired of it. (I’ve been working on it for quite awhile now…)</p>