College Essay

<p>Would anyone like to read and comment on my essay. This essay is for a safety school, and a quick check for grammar mistakes and a comment would be fantastic. The school it is for and the prompt will be included in the PM.</p>


<p>I do not want to be sending this out to many people so only a few! And, yes, I will do a background check of your posts/threads/etc..</p>

<p>Edit: Forgot to mention the word limit is 300 words so it is also pretty short</p>