College Essayyy-someone critique it pleaseeee

<p>Hey, I have an essay…would any of you kindly read it and critique it??
The most important you should look for is- is it passionate??</p>

<p>Adult, college parent will read & critique your essay if you PM it to me.</p>

<p>bumppp any others? deadline is tomorrow.</p>

<p>i can …if you don’t mind…</p>

<p>bumppppppppppppppppppp</p>

<p>willing to read. reminds me,…need to clean my mailbox</p>

<p>will critique</p>