Columbia ED Essay - Teenage Entrepreneurship. Please Critique!

College Essays
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<p>I’ve written a fairly long (but hopefully still interesting!) essay about my journey into managing a web development business. If you guys can read it and let me know how it is, that would be great! I’ll read your essay in return too :)</p>

<p>If you’re applying to Columbia, though, please don’t ask to read it. It’s not going to be much help to either of us.</p>

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<p>I’ll critique it for you :)</p>

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<p>I’ll critque it for you. PM it to me.</p>

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<p>My sister is attending Columbia now I can ask her to look over it for you and give you some feedbacks : )
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