Columbia GS essay

Is it possible for someone (preferably GS admitted students but anyone would be great) to please take a look at my essay? And feedback will be greatly appreciated!

Hey there. I’d love to give feedback on your essay. Not a GS student but I am a current Harvard undergrad. Send me your essay and I’ll take a look if you’d like. PM me for my email address.

Hello james89131! I’m also applying to Columbia GS, could you also read my essay and give a feedback. Would be helpful!

Hi. I PM’d you my email address.