Comment my essay and I'll grant you three wishes

<p>Pretty primitive “why (college)” essay. I need feedback, thank you!</p>

<p>(I reserve the right to grant impossible or eccentric wishes)</p>

<p>which college are you applying to</p>

<p>I’ll read, but no feedback unless you can grant one wish ;)</p>

<p>Sorry, Izzy, I can’t say that. I just want to avoid the hyenas, if you know what I mean…</p>

<p>hahaha ill help</p>

<p>u may PM me.</p>

<p>I’ll help :).</p>

<p>I could help (if I find time to read it)</p>

<p>umm…PM me …</p>