Comments needed for a 500 word essay

College Essays
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<p>I need comments and error-check for a 500 word essay. any help would be greatly appreciated! I will PM you the essay</p>

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<p>I need revisions by tonight though… Sorry for giving you guys such a little amount of time</p>

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<p>ill take a look at it</p>

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<p>i’ve been done with all my app’s for 2 weeks now (whooo) so i have time. pm it over</p>

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<p>I’ll look it over. PM away</p>

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<p>I’ll take a look.</p>

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<p>If you want an extremely critical reader, PM me or email me @ <a href="mailto:momo_yoyo@hotmail.com">momo_yoyo@hotmail.com</a>
I am applying to harvard as a transfer applicant too…
so maybe we can exchange?</p>