<p>I thought it would be strange if I just started posting in someone else’s thread, so I made one myself.</p>
<p>So far, from what I’ve heard, people are saying stuff like “Be Yourself”, “Show your unique qualities”, “Post your experiences”. There’s a need to be ambiguous for things like essays where personal expression counts; these tips however aren’t very helpful to those that seek an anchor. It sounds nice to say these things–heck, I even said these things myself–but in the end the author might still struggle; just because they stop posting or explicitly state that they’re thankful for suggestions does not necessarily mean that they’re done.</p>
<p>My friends, although they have already finished the essay, admitted that the topic itself was very difficult; not only does one have to express yourself, he or she needs to write in such a way that it highlights some distinguishing personal qualities. Based on my research–mainly admission officers’ opinions on essays of the deferred or rejected–cliches such as extreme care for the environment, social welfare, and overcoming obstacles are either overused or shallow; it could even be a fantastic essay but even so the content plays a major factor–writing style and brilliance are not the only playing factors. </p>
<p>How about this: Why not post some framework examples of what people can do on their essay? Of course it doesn’t have to be your own topic, but I believe a series of examples would serve far more than mere tips or suggestions. By posting a couple of examples, those having trouble would have a great chance of contructing their own.</p>
<p>I’ll make an example. As the essence gets ‘less ambiguous’–at least I hope it is getting less ambiguous–the numbered statements get more and more detailed; there isn’t necessarily one example that comes from others less concrete.</p>
<p>Ambiguous
- Elaborate on a experience</p>
<p>Less Ambiguous
- Express introspection on a particular experience
- Elaborate on an action
- Express thoughts on a place</p>
<p>Not as ambiguous as ‘Less Ambiguous’
- Describe what went on in your mind as you went through a particular experience–it could be something subtle or overt, just not exaggerated
- Elaborate specifically how you did something and insights gained along the way.
- As you travel through another mundane day, what special things do you see in your area? What experiences does it evoke?</p>
<p>These aren’t necessary good models to start off of; I am hoping someone could add on a suggestion or two.</p>