comments on my essay topic? PLEASE HELP

<p>i have been working out at the gym since 9th grade(3 years now) and i really want to write about my passion of weightlifting. I have come a long ways since then physically. I want to write about how i took physics junior year and how as i immersed myself more and more into the class, i gained a better understanding and began to think of physics everywhere. including in the gym(lifting weight(mg), providing torque, momentum, etc) and how my love of physics combines with my love of weightlifting. i was gonna open up with something that basically says physics is everywhere. then i would mention the weightlifting and how it applies and contributed to my love of physics.is this a good essay. i wanna be an engineer btw. thanks a lot.</p>

<p>Wow this is a very original essay topic! It delves into not one, but two of your passions (one of them academic) which is really good! I think this type of essay would definitely be unique "you". Way to think outside the box!</p>

<p>It's a great idea! Like elbeeen said, it's "you".</p>

<p>wow, great idea</p>

<p>thanks a lot guys. now its the hard part, putting it together :/</p>

<p>Thats the dumbest idea i've ever heard of. </p>

<p>You're a dumb hoe</p>

<p>^What fun, a troll.</p>

<p>I think it's a fantastic idea, but be sure to delve beyond the "physics is everywhere" concept into specific examples. I think a stream-of-consciousness technique, using your thoughts on physics as you're working out could be very interesting. Contrast the conceptual with the visceral.</p>