Common App Essay About my own business

<p>Please PM me if you're willing to proofread and comment on my common app essay (500 words~). It's about the business I created.</p>

<p>P.S writing is not my forte, so I would appreciate harsh criticism!</p>

<p>Anyone? I'll return the favor.</p>

<p>send it here.</p>

<p>For what schools?</p>

<p>NYU, U of M, Stanford, Cornell, U Chicago, and UPenn</p>