<p>I’m not sure if this topic is too emotional to be a common app essay, and I’d love some feedback. It was honestly the hardest day of my life and I’m afraid it’s just too much for a CA essay.</p>
<p>Will someone (who has already graduated highschool) please read it?
Thanks!</p>
<p>I’ll read it!</p>
<p>I’d love to read it!</p>
<p>I’ll read it</p>
<p>Not offering to read, as I haven’t graduated, BUT be sure to be wary of posters who have a small amount of posts willing to read your essays. These are often the ones that end up coming to this site only to “borrow” essays. (ie, don’t send it to the two above with few posts, just to be on the safe side).</p>
<p>I wouldn’t really have time to give specific edits, but I could tell you what I think about the topic in general 
Feel free to send it my way!</p>
<p>I would love to check it out :)</p>
<p>I will eat - I mean read it. (lol haven’t had breakfast yet)</p>
<p>@gkoehl1997 @nycutie786 @AnnieBeats @capitalamerica @LAMuniv Thanks for all the offers, guys! I’ve actually decided to scrap the essay completely, but thank you all for offering to read it.</p>
<p>Sure, shoot me a pm if you need some more feedback.</p>