Common app essay about the impact of a terrorist attack

College Essays
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<p>This is just a first draft, and it’s too long for my liking. Not satisfied with it at the moment, so if you guys could offer your advice that would be great. Post here and I’ll PM you (but no 2014-ers, please).</p>

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<p>bump, I’ll critique yours if you critique mine</p>

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<p>…no one? lol</p>

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<p>Fraud, I’ll critique yours if you want. I’m trying to transfer to UCLA this year from a CC. I’ll PM you mine too if you like. I only have the first one done, but I’d really appreciate any input or feedback. Anyways, PM me if you want me to check it out, and let me know if you’ll do the same for my statement.</p>

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<p>thanks, I PM’d you</p>

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<p>pm me
but help me read mine too, ok?</p>

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<p>thanks, i’ll read yours</p>