<p>Describe a place or environment where you are perfectly content. What do you do or experience there, and why is it meaningful to you?</p>
<p>Hi Guys, I would really like some feedback on my essay about working at McDonalds, is it cliche or not moving or not descriptive enough, etc. Is it good enough for a top tier school.</p>
<p>edit: didn’t read some of the info posted on the forum about posting your essay so I decided to take it down however I would really appreciate it if someone could help me stand out from a crowd.</p>