Common App Essay Feedback?

<p>So, it's already submitted (my college guidance counselor forced me) but your critiques will enable me to worry more about things that can't be changed! But I'd love to know if it's actually good/will stand out, so I can maybe gauge my chances at colleges more accurately?</p>

<p>Let me know if you're willing to provide feedback and I will PM it to you! Thanks!</p>

<p>Send them over septembergurl.</p>

<p>Actually, I'm making an alternate Common App for three schools, so critique would be VERY much appreciated. Thanks!</p>

<p>thecollege1: you were very helpful. Thank you. Which topics within my (main) essay would you suggest focusing on?</p>

<p>Just sent you a response. Let me know if you get it.</p>