Common App Essay! FINAL CHECKS :O

<p>I was wondering if I could get a couple of comments on my Common App essay before I submit it for a few colleges. I chose the prompt:
-Evaluate a significant experience, achievement, risk you have taken, or ethical dilemma you have faced and its impact on you.</p>

<p>Thanks to anyone for helping!</p>

<p>I can read it :) Just PM me. I can probably give you feedback on the same day or a day after</p>

<p>Send it on over =)</p>