Common App essay for HPYSM + others

College Essays
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<p>I would love to have some readers for my common app essay I am sending to many top schools. I chose prompt #1, as I felt it was the most general and would fit whatever I wanted to write about.</p>

<p>Please be as critical as possible, and I really appreciate you taking your time to help me out!</p>

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<p>you can send it to me! I’ll read it for you :)</p>

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<p>ill read it!!</p>

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<p>I’ll read it!</p>

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<p>I can read it for you.</p>

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<p>i would like to read it for you.</p>

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<p>I’d be happy to read it</p>

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<p>If you don’t have enough feedback already, I’ll read it haha</p>

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<p>same here!</p>

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<p>sent to you all!</p>

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<p>I’ll read it too.</p>

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<p>I’ll read!</p>

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<p>I’ll read!</p>

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<p>I will read it!!</p>

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<p>Np!</p>

<p>pm me.</p>

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<p>I will read it.</p>

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<p>People, the deadlines for HYPSM have all passed and this thread is from October. What do you think, does the OP still need some feedback, or not? Don’t look so desperate, please.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it too!</p>