Common App Essay for Stanford EA, Princeton, etc. on horseback riding – Help Edit?

College Essays
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<p>My essay is on my main EC, horseback riding and competing in pole bending, an event similar to barrel racing. I need people who don’t know much about horses to read it, so I know if I am unclear on anything, as well as general help with editing/condensing. I’m a little over 700 words right now, and I am looking for people who aren’t afraid to be brutal.</p>

<p>Anyone willing to take a look-see? It would be much appreciated. </p>

<p>For schools:
Stanford SCEA
Princeton
Yale
Columbia
Duke
Harvard
Cornell
Johns Hopkins
Northwestern
Bucknell
Boston University</p>

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<p>If you need extra opinions, I could give you some advice!</p>

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<p>I read some of the essays here, in fact, 4. If you like my comments on them, you can pm the essay.</p>

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<p>PM me, I am interested to have an insight o your essay. It seems u have produced a quality essay</p>

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<p>Sure, I’ll help edit too. PM me.</p>

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<p>I’ll give it a read over.</p>

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<p>I’ll give it a read.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it and critique it for you. I know absolutely nothing about horses!</p>

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<p>don’t know how to ride horses, so, I guess I’ll be a good audience. pm me</p>