Common app essay for UPenn, Emory, Notre Dame, UVA...

<p>anyone want to look over and critique my personal statement? feel free to be harsh. its about 650 words so cutting words would be really helpful :)</p>

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<p>I'd be willing to read it but with harsh critique. PM me it</p>

<p>I have time tonight, so just PM me :)</p>

<p>Sure, happy to help.</p>