Common App Essay - good? bad?

College Essays
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<p>I’ve been using this essay for almost every college i’ve applied to… since getting an ED rejection from Cornell, I feel really bad about it… I thought it was good… anyone want to take a look? its about architecture-ish. THANKS!</p>

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<p>I can help you out. PM me.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it…</p>

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<p>I will read it too!</p>

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<p>will read it too. <a href="mailto:tyac.sg@gmail.com">tyac.sg@gmail.com</a></p>

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<p>I can take a look, PM me</p>