Common App essay help- be Brutally honest.

I want people that can read my essay and tear it apart while giving me specific criticism to make it better. My essay is for Prompt 1 of the Common App.

I can help. My friends always glare at me for grading so harshly during AP lang peer reviews.

I’m pretty harsh…I don’t know if you actually want that but feel free to contact me

You can send it to me if you still want help.

I can help!

I can help.

Same here! I can help too

Can I help?

I don’t mean to be a downer, but it seems like quite a few people who posted here offering help are relatively new to CC (looking at post counts). I am not saying to immediately not trust them, but I would tread cautiously.