Common App Essay Help! I promise it's interesting!

<p>I just finished my Common App essay and I think it is great, but would like some other opinions. Like I said in the title, it is unique and you will enjoy it.</p>

<p>If you wouldn’t mind reading it and giving me some feedback, either post your email on here and I’ll email it, or private message me your email and i’ll email it. I’d be happy to return the favor.</p>

<p>Thanks,
JTaylor12</p>

<p>I don't mind lending a helping hand. Finished most of my essays and I've got some time</p>

<p>I'll take a look at it for you.</p>