Common app essay help!!!!!

<p>Can anyone please give me some feedback about my common app essay for Cornell? cornell is my dream school and would really like to get in. I am open to any sort of criticism. Thanks in advance.</p>

<p>Oh sure, this will read be the third I read. I should say that I am applying to Cornell as well.</p>

<p>i'd be happy to read. pm me</p>

<p>I can read it. Please PM prompt as well.</p>

<p>I would be happy to give input.</p>

<p>@usuniversity2017</p>

<p>CC won't let me PM until I've reached 15 posts. I'll get back to you ASAP.</p>

<p>Hey I can help pm it to me !</p>