Common App Essay - Historical Figure

<p>Hello all. I’m new to this site and recently discovered it through a friend. It was a pleasant surprise to find that there was actually a forum for college essays! And I had my common app essay already written (a draft, for revision once the school year begins) and I was curious if anyone would be interested in reading it and offering their opinion or revisions and whatnot. I’m looking into Cornell as my #1, USMA (which isn’t related to common app, but that’s just on my list), Swarthmore, SUNY Stony Brook, and several others. If anyone is up for it, please let me know, and I would greatly appreciate it! Thanks! =]</p>

<p>i already hve my essay done so i can look at urs if you want. i havent read one on this topic yet…sounds cool</p>

<p>Sent via PM. I never wrote a college essay before, so I dunno if it drags on or not.</p>

<p>You can PM it over to me to look over</p>

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<li>I’m currently working on mines: my false sense of being bipolar: how music influences emotions, my drive etc.</li>
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<p>You can PM it to me too. Will be glad to read over it.</p>

<p>Sent via PM to you both. If either of you have essays, I’ll read yours over as well. Thank you!</p>

<p>Ok mines, is like dissected and all over the place. I have sort of a writers block so I dont know what direction I wanna take mines in. I’ll send it over tho</p>