<p>I’ve written two rough drafts for common app essays. I’m not sure which one to pick. I was wondering if anyone would be willing to read both of them and tell me which one they think has more potential. Note: I’m a very weak writer, but I’d be willing to read others if they requested.</p>
<p>PM if you’re interested</p>
<p>One has to do with training for a triathlon</p>
<p>The second has to do with me getting a stress fracture</p>
<p>Again, these are just rough drafts!</p>
<p>Thanks!</p>