Common APP Essay Influence Malcolm X

<p>Hey everybody, I chose to right my personal statement on the common app about the historical figure that influenced me the most, and I chose Malcolm X, would guys please critique my essay? be brutal
thanks</p>

<p>pm it, ill take a look</p>

<p>i can take a look.</p>

<p>Hit me up with your essay. I’d be glad to read it.</p>