<p>Hello cc members,</p>
<p>I’m a high school senior in the midst of the college essay writing process. I wrote my personal statement about my experience this summer at a nursing home (this is actually my third version-- I scrapped the first two). Would anyone be willing to read it over and give me comments? I’m mainly looking for general comments on the essay/ suggestions for improvement.</p>
<p>Thank you (:</p>