<p>who would be kind enough to critique?</p>
<p>i’d love to help</p>
<p>I’ll help, if you need someone else. XD</p>
<p>i’d be willing to help if you still need it.</p>
<p>let me read it, and if you have time i will send you mine also</p>
<p>if you need help i would like to read it, going along with doctorsboy’s idea, i would send mine as well.</p>
<p>I can help too.</p>
<p>I could, as well.</p>
<p>count me in</p>
<p>I would liek to read it</p>
<p>I’ll read it.</p>